Review my Flash Catalyst website.


hello

 

i thought i'd use forum constructive feedback on website design. first site designed fc. i'd know how holds up. can lend me thoughts?

 

thank kindly

 

http://www.whiteherongrill.com/

very classy new-age design have there. color schemes nice, browns , pale blues. did come schemes yourself, or apart of resturaunts theme , feel? reguardless, it.

 

on home page, have nice slide show of of photography of food. thumps photographer. i, myself, rather new catalyst (started today, actually) function did use slideshow? timing frame frame nice. if gives enough time appriciate, want more.

there 1 problem came across: if wait end of slideshow, "slideshow" button comes up. if click on it, reloads page. anticipating? thing noticed while not viewable, button still clickable. might able adjust if using states disabling button until final state, enabling button. not sure method used slideshow not sure if work, but, might able adjust if feel adjustment want make.

 

the designs , pans think good, there appears lot of things coming off , on directions state state. might dissorient viewers. keeping things 2 directions (for example: pan right, pan down) can simplify design, , give unity website.

 

one other thing disorients lot of buttons open new tabs , windows. became little afraid click on button because not sure if new window going pop or not.

 

break down:

first impression: a

the first load says lot!

 

design: b+.

different states have pans going directions resulting in lack of unity. user can never tell button do, way launcing new window.

 

functionality: a-

functioning site! except slideshow button

 

highlights:

classy look

use of bing *thumb not using google* (as growing fan of bing)

 

half highlight:

option mobile users.

thumbs option. thumbs down fact on mobile platform, still hard surf. maybe more accurate name "non flash version." mobile version still launches pdf files. many phones / iphone/ipad have pdf viewing capabilities?

 

would cool:

if made mini app read weather/directions off of bing using flex.

if eliminate of new window pop-ups (except menu. feels appropriate menu, if apart of website application, better! don't want costumers/viewers leaving site @ hand)

 

the question:

would go restraunt based on website?

i would! website produces great image restraunt. go if close by, on date. yes, website selling point audience.

 

in site meant to: people want go restraunt.

 

how long did take develop page design product? did spend more time in design phase, or catalyst phase?

 

best of luck friend!

-stuffles.



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